Sol Magazine
September 2001 Edition


Sol Magazine © 2001


Our topics touch a variety of subjects about nature and the nature of humanity.  The purpose of our all-volunteer organization is to educate poets, and to foster the reading and writing of short poetry.  We are not a vanity press.  Not every poem submitted will be published.  We are a family magazine.  Do not advocate the use of alcohol or drugs in your poetry then ask us to consider your work.  Please read our monthly rules before sending us your work.
 
 

FEATURED ARTICLES
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GLOSSARY -  "Refrain: Poetic repetition,"
by Betty Ann Whitney, Assistant Editor
http://pages.prodigy.net/sol.magazine/glossary.htm
ON THE WEB - "Modern American Poetry Site," 
by Craig Tigerman, Lead Editor
http://pages.prodigy.net/sol.magazine/onweb.htm
SPOTLIGHT - "Dark Dreams," an interview with Cliff Roberts
by Mary Margaret Carlisle, Managing Editor 
and Paula M. Bentley, Assistant Editor 
CURRENT EVENTS 
New postings for October
http://pages.prodigy.net/sol.magazine/events.htm

 
 
CONTENTS:

 


 

LETTERS
  FROM:  Roberta Pipes Bowman - Dear Mary, Thank you for the tribute (in August's Edition) to Lena Norman. It was beautiful (tribute) for this lovely poet who is no longer with us. Best. 
  FROM:  Suzie La Forge - I want to thank you for recognizing Lena Norman, her spirit and her poetry, on your website.  She was a wonderful poet.  However, even more important, she was a kind and gentle member of our community.  Her gardening, quilting, scrabble contests---were all talents at which she excelled.  Her book of poetry is a delight to read and memories come quickly to all of us who were touched by this fascinating individual.
  FROM:  Louie Levy - My very best regards to Craig, Betty Ann and the other very talented writers of Sol. I don't know how you all give soooo much. Your dedication is a blessing of your precious literary gifts shared with the aspiring as well as the accomplished writer.
  FROM:  Kathy Kehrli - It was wonderful to see two of my poems in your  issue and even more delightful to recieve a prize for my "Picnic" poem.  It was so fun to write that one!  Kudos to you and your staff for your contests and topics, which always inspire me.

BEST POEMS OF SEPTEMBER

We found it difficut to choose a single "best poem" this month, so we chose two. Here they are.

This Boot of Death

I see the hospice nurse in white.
Her chalky presence
blowing dust across a board.
Your i.v. drip,
an etherizing summer rain.
Clock arms set in gray concrete.
A patio of shrinking flowers,
brown spindles of geraniums,
dandruff of alyssum buds
awaiting a massaging wind.
Meals I cook and you don't eat
a wish will freeze in innocence.
Age is readier than youth
to smile on lousy poker hands.

I tip-toe through the silences,
stitch a tear in roving stanzas,
tape a shoelace, shove its stray
through tiny eyelets of the void.
Spray old beds of potpourri
with ipecac of roses gone,
bring you back like bags of tea.
Scrub my study, shine its wood
as women bathe behind a rape.
Dancing with this boot of death,
I'm all bruised shins and six left feet.
Seven years have passed
their suns and lumpy moons.
The end is still an asteroid
that crumbles as it strikes the sky.
Yolk and white in fragile shell
so whole it could be kidney stones.

Janet I. Buck, Medford, Oregon

EDITORS' COMMENTS:  Specific and intensely original use of imagery to evoke both beauty and horror, the commonplace and the incredible in the same scene.  Well-written and full of images poetically encapsulating the writer's experience in the midst of "death and dying." Wry commentary, "six left feet," dancing with a boot of death.
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Asperges - September 2001

Wash
me a-
shore.
Is this
my country
any-
more?
Seems there's
no longer
sanctuary
any place.
Wash me
out
to sea,
peaceful wave -
far from
here,
far from
fear.

John E. Rice, Houston, TX

EDITORS' COMMENTS:  With particular observation to tiny details, the poet makes the leap to a larger disturbing experience, illuminating strain, while vividly illustrating many dimensions of human feeling. Clear expression of the simple desire to escape reality.

EDITOR'S NOTE:  This concise, precise and highly lucid poem uses a new form, the Waltz Wave.  This form was created by Sol Magazine's Managing Editor, Mary Margaret Carlisle, to honor our Web Manager, Leo F. Waltz.



SEPTEMBER HIDDEN CONTEST:  ON WRITING - WALTZ WAVE





FIRST PLACE

New York Reporter

Out
windows
they
escape
hellish heat.
Falling
lives
words lost
in horror
mind confetti
paper shreds
smoking
how
can I
write about
it? No
tears
just facts
now.

Deborah P. Kolodji, Temple City, CA

EDITORS' COMMENTS:  With sharp,jagged edges, this piece captures the shocked numbness of the horror, and how trivial or futile the task of writing a news story can become in light of such shocking scenes.  Terse writing, with a careful choice of words that reflect the depth of thought behind this poem.  Images, thoughts, ideas combine to make the bigger picture more clearly seen.
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SECOND PLACE
Shriven

If
I can
write
the right
words for us
all to
hear
to take
us to an
absolution
without fear,
perhaps
then,
somehow
I will have
paid my
keep,
earned my
sleep.

John E. Rice, Houston, TX

EDITORS' COMMENTS:  Tight writing.  The subtle use of rhythm and rhyme gently, but insistently, carries the reader to the conclusion.  Clearly  intelligent and thought-out manipulation of words beautifully fit this flowing form.  The quiet rhyme scheme helps to unifiy the poem.  Most appropriate title reinforces the meaning of the poem.
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THIRD PLACE
Riding the Wave of Writing

When
I sit
And
Let my
Fingers dance
Over
The
Keyboard
And pour out
My heart and mind
Into the
Strongest
Words
Given
To my soul,
I know
Words
Are my
Strength.

Katherine Swarts, Houston, TX

EDITORS' COMMENTS:  Expresses the artistry of writing, and shows the effort that must be expended to yield strong results.  The harmonious arrangement of words complements both subject and form as it creates the feeling of riding on waves.  Lovely piece, almost a prayer.


Sol Magazine will mail no book prizes to poets outside the United States of America.  Book gift certificates from Barnes & Noble will be substituted.  No exceptions.
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All poetry remains the property of the poet, except Sol Magazine reserves the right to publish all poems (once) at a future date, and/or to post them to a web page.  NONE may be reproduced without permission of Sol Magazine.  Electronic forwarding is permitted as long as no portion of this magazine is changed and all credits are given.
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Sponsors in 2001:  M. G. Angel, Mary Margaret Carlisle, Lois Lay Castiglioni, SuzAnne Cole, Jim Lay, Cliff Thomas Roberts, Marsha Rose Steed.
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Angels in 2001:  Leo F. Waltz.
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Book donors in 2001:  Paula Marie Bentley, Debby Cochran, Katherine Elmore, Maryann Hazen-Stearns, Glynn Monroe Irby, Peggy Zuleika Lynch, Carlyn Luke Reding, Cliff Thomas Roberts, John Salacan, Kathleen Elizabeth Schaefer, Craig Tigerman.

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